A Glow Appeared

It was an ordinary day, a glow appeared in the tall thin grass. It travelled elegantly and slowly and the mysterious glow faded as it went further and further away. The light spoke. And as there was no one around it spoke as loud as it could. Then it went into a tree, a fairly big and tall tree, and the light turned off and the voice grew louder. As it was winter there were no leaves left on the tree. Then the next night there was no light but the moon shone with mist! Is this good or bad…

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  1. You have written a really good paragraph here, using great descriptive words throughout your text. You have used punctuation really well which helps create suspense for the reader/audience. Great work! 🙂

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