Annoyed

One day I was on a call to my BFF Bella and we was talking about what game we should play on Roblox….

Bella said, “Ohhh…… I found a game!”

So then I joined her and when I joined her it was actually a good game it was called ‘Adopt me’ and I loved that game….. We played the game for 2 hours until we got bored.  I said, “Do you want to end the call? We can go out on walk if you want?”

Bella said, “Yes.” but she was quite sad because we had to end the call.

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  1. Hello!
    Many of my own students enjoy playing Roblox, so your story made me think of the many conversations we’ve had about it! One issue I noticed in your entry was that you didn’t incorporate this week’s “I’m trying to hold on,” he shouted… into your writing. How do you think you would use it in this story with Bella and you?
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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