At Sundown

On a deserted beach, that hasn’t been used in approximately 57 years and 28 days. Bolt and Nevel went on an adventurous trip, they did not know where they were at all. This was also quite mysterious because they took a bus and usually it tells you where you are going but this one didn’t. All of a sudden they stumbled across these brightly coloured of what seemed like manikins. These so-called manikins looked like they were from Night at the Museum because they looked like they would come to life whenever the sun went down and the moon came up! OH NO! It was sundown now.  From what Nevel and Bolt saw was that the manikins were moving right towards them!

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  1. Hello Chloe,
    I have so many questions! Why did Bolt and Nevel get on a bus when they didn’t know where it was going? Are the statues friendly? Are Bolt and Nevel in danger? Are they going to get back home safely? Of course it is not possible to give the full story in just 100 words but you did a really good job of setting up a mystery adventure and brought the reader along with the characters. I loved how you added to the mystery and suspense by having your characters on board a bus with an unknown destination, I think that was very clever.
    Well done and keep up the good work,
    Múinteoir Mairéad (Ireland)
    Team 100

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