Daydream

One windy Autumn evening, there was a girl named Eve who was 15 and was comfortably sitting on her small brown chair. Suddenly her pet raccoon named Zoe came to snuggle up on her lap.  She saw a brown leaf, red leaf, orange leaf and a yellow leaf fluttering down from the trees. Suddenly she heard a roar of thunder and a fork of lightning from the dark sky. Then out of the corner of her eye, she saw a small brown box and said, “what I thought I already took out all the recycling!” So she took out the small annoying box.

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  1. Summer,
    Your piece had a mix of emotions…it seemed gentle with use of words like SNUGGLING and COMFORTABLY, and then the FORK OF LIGHTNING and use of the word ANNOYING switched the mood. You were able to cleverly place the focus words. Good work. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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