Don’t blink!

The recording spoke. “Don’t run. Don’t look away!” They looked at each other confused. They’ve been trapped in a haunted manor and they found a random video tape. The man continued. “The angels! They are hungry. They are fast! Faster than you can imagine!”. They both looked at the angels. Still confused because they were just concrete statues in white robes and pink flower crowns. “Don’t close your eyes, don’t look away and DON’T BLINK! good luck.”. Jenny and Jerry tried staring at the statues without blinking. Jerry failed: Jenny started shouting at him for blinking. They both realised no one was looking at the angels. One made them jump in fright. Its eyes started to glow and their heads began revolving until finally, their heads fell off…

2 thoughts on “Don’t blink!”

  1. Hello Oscar Z.,
    While a little long for the 100 Word Challenge (105 words this week with five prompt words), your entry would be a wonderful beginning to a horror story. It’s creative and sets the reader’s imagination running. Well done!
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Hi thanks for the nice comment. Also sorry I’ll try to make it shorter next time.



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