F.B.I open up

One day a person robbed a shop and killed 10 cops with a rifle, The S.W.A.T. came and tried to get him, but he got away.  A dog came looking for him and found him looking like he was going to rob the shop again.  It asked another dog, “Which way to the shops?” it panted.  The other dog did not know and alarm went off.  They saw the robber go into a house.  The F.B.I came and said, “F.B.I OPEN UP!” and broke down the door.  A S.W.A.T. helicopter came and the team came out, went through the roof and they arrested the robber and put him in prison.

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  1. Greetings from Australia Logan. You generated interesting ideas for this week’s challenge. Personification of the dogs added to your text and using sentences of different lengths made your text engaging. I always appreciate accurate punctuation. I enjoyed reading your writing. 🙏😊

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