When I was younger, I played football and I was allowed to play with my friends outside. When I was playing, I once said, ”but I didn’t mean to hit it that hard.” I had hit the wall in front garden and there was a large mark on the white painted wall! When I went home, I got in soooo much trouble. I wasn’t allowed to go outside for nearly a month. I was really sad. “I’m sorry!” I said again and again. It didn’t work. I was still grounded.
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hi there faith,
I really liked that you were creative with your righting piece but maybe next time try to get a bit closer to 100 but it was still really interesting and entertaining I would muchly appreciate if you came and looked at my blog here is the link https://sophie56mps.edublogs.org/2022/03/18/oops-that-happened/
from sophie
hey, faith!
your piece had some humor behind it which I thought was nice and funny and added something to the story that I can’t really explain lol. But one thing I feel you could fix for the future is maybe more details? Because I could understand and follow the story but it felt very vague to me, also you are about ten words off from one hundred. But otherwise, it’s great!
~Addison/Addi from Illinois