Homework

I was finishing my homework but it was time for bed. Early in the morning when I was going to school, we were looking who did their homework, but I was not there.  I didn’t remember putting it on.  At home time, I rushed home to write again, because only one person put there work on. I was worried  because my sister was on the computer. I had to wait until she came off, but it took 2hours. I  just managed to finish it, but I forgot all the speech. I was like a blueberry. Every one was laughing at me. I decided to stay in and write it all again. When we looked again, it was fantastic. I was pleased with myself.

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  1. I love how you structured your sentences: they made me imagine your panic. I am glad it all worked out in the end.

    Keep up the good work!
    Ms Young
    Team 100WC
    London

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