I never should of said yes

When I got back home, my mum and dad said that we are going to Jurasic Park. I said yes, but I think it was going to be bad. When we got there, I saw a branchiasouras and it had a very long neck and a t-rex and it was out of its cage. I screamed for help. I never should of said yes. I ran back to the car. My mum and dad were still there and I told them that the t-rex was out of its cage.  We drove back home and I’m never saying yes ever again.

2 thoughts on “I never should of said yes”

  1. Ooh Leo. Although that was certainly a very scary experience, you might regret that last statement. Next years holiday might be a trip to Disneyland!
    I’m impressed with your sentence structure and particularly the use of commas. When you next use ‘should have’ please try to remember to say have, not should of.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (team 100WC)
    New Zealand

  2. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Leo. A story about Jurassic Park engages your reader because most people know the film, or about dinosaurs. It is a good idea to re-read your writing, and edit for punctuation. Punctuation helps readers to know how you want your text to be read.

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