I’m trying

IIt was just a normal day at school when my mum and dad thought that we should go on a trip to the forest.  When we got there, we found a mystery cave and we went in.  There was a beast so we went to go see but the beast woke up and then it swung its tail and then suddenly  I was flying .  I landed on a bridge.  My dad was  shouting to me but then the dragon came and saved me.  Meanwhile I was saying, “I’m trying to hold on.” Somehow the dragon saved me and we flew home.

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  1. Hello Lilly-May,

    Your well written story made good use of the prompt. A family trip to a forest, a mystery cave and a flying dragon coming to your rescue is quite some story. When I go hiking all I see at times are kangaroos, monitor lizards, snakes and birds but never a dragon. Keep writing!

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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