Let me see part 1



It was just a normal day, but when I came home, my sister had a weird box.  She kept it in her room but I couldn’t go in.  One day she went out, so I went in.  She wasn’t gone for long and she caught me.  Then I said, “I just had had to see what was inside of it.” Then my sister said, “It’s just photos of me and you and everyone in our family.  It’s the family photo box.”

“Oops  sorry, but can I see it.”I asked.

We sat on her bed and looked at the photos and then it was tea time and I went to bed. 

The mysterious box

One cold snowy day there was a girl called Lucy who loved to read books.  Once she got a knock on her door which seemed a bit strange, because she never really gets gifts!  So she went downstairs and opened her door carefully and she saw a…. mysterious box that said do not open! Lucy was a bit worried, so she looked around her garden to see if anybody was there. Nobody was there, but suddenly she saw a glow coming out of the box.  Then, when she got closer and opened half the box, a man ran into her garden and shouted, “DO NOT OPEN THE BOX. IT’S A TRAP!!” Then she was very scared and said, “I just wanted to what was inside!”😧

The box

I was lying on my couch watching tv when I heard a bang.  I went to check it out and saw a box. I hadn’t ordered anything, but decided I’d take it. I got my knife and got to work – there was a box inside a box.  The other one had chains –  oh goodness. I cut the chains and got ready to open it.  I just had to see what was inside. I opened it and was horrified to see some guns like an m16 and p90. I reported this to the police immediately, but they were clueless.

The big dragon part two

(Before reading this please read part one of this story before this one oh and this is a collaboration with timmy’s crazy car adventure2)


“Huh why’s the ground shaking?” said Emily slowly but quietly.

‘’EARTHQUAKE!’’ shouted Angela. Suddenly the ground Collapsed and they fell through the floor or should  I say dried out snow!?  Angela landed face first on the ground saying, ’’Owww that hurt.’’  And then sat up to see a boy on his feet shaking the snow off his shirt. Ignoring the boy, she saw a sign that said (warning abandoned underground mine DO NOT GO IN).  Then suddenly a dragon came flying down.  Then 3 hearts popped up around Emily. Then without thinking, the boy jumped onto the dragon. Then Angela shouted’, ’WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING UP THERE?!’

“SHUT UP, I’m trying to hold on!” he shouted.


Crazy August

Hello I’m Elise and I’m gonna tell you about my crazy August. If you didn’t know my birthday is in August. On the 1st of August we went to a party. Then on 4th of August  we went on a walk with my dog called Patch. A few days later, on 7th of August we went on a steep cliff. We climbed, “I’m trying to hold on!” I shouted.  15th of August was my birthday. At the end of the month on 27th of August, I went and slept with a person called Lily, my mum and her mum we’re really good friends.  3 days later I went to a friends house.  So yeah that was my crazy August…