I was going on a walk, when I came across a cave. I heard noises coming from the cave. I had to see what was inside, but what if it was dangerous… I went closer to get a better look. I saw something shiny, so I went inside and picked it up. It was dark and I used a torch to see. I took it out of the cave to get a better look. I brushed all the dust off – it looked like a chest. The key was at the back of the cave, so I went back in to get it. I tried it and it opened the chest. Inside the chest there were gold and gems – we were rich.
I can’t help but wonder, from where did the noises come? I would love to see more description of the chest and its contents! Great story – keep on rocking your writing!
Ms. Garner
Team 100