The haunted statue

Once I went into a forest with my friend Bella. We were going to have a picnic, but I saw this really weird statue.  But it was haunted… Ever since that day we have been haunted – the next day I fell in a hole that led to hell. Right next to me Bella said,  “We were the chosen ones.”  The statue said that we could be the Satan queens. We said, “You will torture us and we want to go to heaven. Heaven is nicer we want to go to heaven. Goodbye.”

And we both ruled heaven…

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  1. Hi Elise,

    I thought that this was a creative and very entertaining piece in response to this week’s prompt. Your writing and language were accurate, as well as smooth throughout. I also enjoyed the development of the story- what an adventure that your characters must have had, and I’m certainly glad that it all ended well for them!

    Keep up the good work.
    Anna (Team 100WC)

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