The Haunted Tree

Once there was a child called Jim and he was walking in a beautiful forest when he came across a vast tree. Jim was scared but he walked around the tree and saw a horrible face. Jim felt dizzy and fell to the ground. He had a horrible dream of the tree coming to life and the tree was guarding the outside of the forest.  Then one night when the tree was buried in leaves, Jim escaped. Then as soon as Jim had escaped, he woke up in the hospital with his parents crying and the doctors trying to find out what happened.

2 thoughts on “The Haunted Tree”

  1. Your story flows really well, Casper. It is an excellent response to the picture prompt. I like the way you mix fantasy with reality, with Jim waking up in hospital at the end of your story. Or was it fantasy? You reader does not know!

  2. Hello Casper,
    A stroll in a beautiful forest takes a dark turn when Jim encounters a tree with a horrible face. Trapped but able to escape, Jim wakes in hospital to find his parents crying and doctors wondering what happened.
    Keep exploring and sharing your creative ideas.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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