The headless Christmas

Once I went on a holiday to a mansion. It took 3 hours  to get there.  When we got there, It was not so bad.  It was the middle of the night and I heard a noise. I went down the stairs and I saw my mum.  I asked if she heard it as well.  She said,  ‘Yes I heard it so I am looking for It okay I will help you find it.’  Then I saw something on the chandelier!  After that, I heard It say something. I got it down and…

One thought on “The headless Christmas”

  1. Very interesting story! I like the way you integrated a dialogue to build the suspense. Well done!

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