the horror story 2

Every time I look out my bedroom window I see a particular tree and think
of the same thing – DEATH. One day, I grew curious about it so I thought I would go up to it. Slowly and carefully, I approached . My heart raced. When I hit it It swallowed me and I ended up in an hole with a door. The door opened up and I walked in and something hit me on the head and I blacked out. When I woke up, a gleaming light was in my eyes. I tried to move but I couldn’t.  So that’s how I was trapped…

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  1. Hello Lacey,
    Your story is one well-placed in a nightmare with a common theme of danger and being trapped. Your open ending leaves a reader wanting to return to find what resulted. Well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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