The mysterious box

One cold snowy day there was a girl called Lucy who loved to read books.  Once she got a knock on her door which seemed a bit strange, because she never really gets gifts!  So she went downstairs and opened her door carefully and she saw a…. mysterious box that said do not open! Lucy was a bit worried, so she looked around her garden to see if anybody was there. Nobody was there, but suddenly she saw a glow coming out of the box.  Then, when she got closer and opened half the box, a man ran into her garden and shouted, “DO NOT OPEN THE BOX. IT’S A TRAP!!” Then she was very scared and said, “I just wanted to what was inside!”😧

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  1. Hello Bella, this is an interesting story. I really like how your story builds. Moving from a knock on the door, to reading not to open the box, looking around her garden, and then the “glow”, really grabs your interest. I am sure, I would absolutely want to open that box. Well done.

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