The mystical cold night

It was January 3rd and me and my friends went to the park. It was very cold so we put our jackets on and we went to the park. We were at the park when suddenly we heard somebody saying help the deafening screams echoed through the cold night. Kyle decided that we shouldn’t go just in case it could be a trap. I thought we shouldn’t go as well. May and Jude wanted to go so we did a challenge to see if we go there or not.  May and Jude won the challenge, so we went in and found a scroll dun dun dun…

One thought on “The mystical cold night”

  1. Hi Chloe,
    Well done. Try and say ‘my friends and I’ rather than ‘me and my friends’. I’d love to know more about the mysterious scroll that you all found!
    Mrs O Sullivan.

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