The night sky

Once there was a boy called Dan, he wanted to go on an adventure with his friends. Their names were Jamie and Sam, they were planning to escape at night. “Why are we sneaking out?” asked Tom.“I think there is treasure!” answered Dan. “Come on guys, oh my I think I found something!” Dan’s friends slowly approached with him, his friends were telling him it is a trap but he didn’t listen. Suddenly a cage surrounded them. Tom bellowed, “I knew this wasn’t a good idea!” Something opened the cage and dragged us all into the darkness and we disappeared into the night. 

One thought on “The night sky”

  1. Interesting story! Well done on including your characters, could we have a little more description about them? Great use of speech between the characters and the ending is very gripping, where do they go? Do we ever see them again?

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