The Raccoon in the sky

There was a knock on Bailey’s door.                                                                                       She walked to the door to see who or what was there.                                                  It was a box!                                                                                                                                     CREAK went her door behind her. She opened the box and in it was a note covered in leaves.                                                                                                                            The note said, sit on the chair  and look up at the sky. So that is what she did.

Bailey sat patiently  but nothing happend,  Then a Raccoon   started dancing in the sky.

“Woahhhh!”she cried.                                                                                                                   The Raccoon was doing amazing back flips, he then sat on a cloud.

“Cool!” she squealed.                                                                                                                She laughed and  laughed but the Raccoon  disappeared.     

 

 

 

2 thoughts on “The Raccoon in the sky”

  1. Dear Aimee,

    I really enjoyed your story because of the imagination in it.
    I have never heard of a dancing raccoon, especially in the sky!
    Would you like this to ever happen to you?
    I love how it shows different genres.
    Keep it up!

    Kind regards,
    Lillie

    1. Lillie,
      Thank you very much for your comment I really enjoyed reading it.
      I don’t know if i would like it, but then i do because it would be very cool.

      From,
      Aimee x

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