the story of the house

There was a little girl who was riding down the street when she came across a house. It looked very old and it was number 29.   She was scared so  she left but then she came back and  her mum said there was a bomb that hit the house and it was not safe and she should not go near,  but she did! She knew that she shouldn’t, but she did. She felt the stones under her crumbling.  She was scared and knocked on the door and it opened wide.  She was very scared and went in and then she heard a noise…

One thought on “the story of the house”

  1. Olivia,
    I am reading your piece wondering if the girl is brave or naughty? I am worried for her as she has seemed to have disappeared after approaching and entering the scary house. You have left the readers with a cliff-hanger. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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