The swan that ate my love

One day there was a huge scooter. I was on it, painting a huge cabbage black, because why not? Then a swan came up to me and said, “Can I have that cabbage?” Of course he didn’t know that the cabbage was my one true love that I sleep with at night. I wake up with black all over me but don’t know why. Obviously, I said no to the swan because cabbage is my love. The swan attacked me and took my cabbage.  I tried to fight back but he ate my love in front of me. Then I gave him Skittles.

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  1. Hello Byron,
    Your quirky* story caught my attention because of the character and his love for a cabbage and sadness when the swan ate it. You were able to use all five prompt words.
    Keep writing and sharing your ideas.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
    *quirky – different to normal, peculiar

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