The yellow and black ugly cave

One day a tiny yellow duck went into a black ugly cave. They heard a BIG BANG and then they saw a strange brown and black hospital. They went back to the cave but they heard another big rock bang so they ran away.  The rock fell down on the exit closing it.  The yellow duck ran to the other side but a another rock fell and closed that exit.  So the duck was stuck for a long time.  The mum came to find the tiny duck stuck.  The mum called the dad and the sister and they helped free the other duck. They all lived happily ever after.

2 thoughts on “The yellow and black ugly cave”

  1. hey i red your piece it was really good one thing i liked about it was when the rock fell and close closed the exit so the duck couldnt get out of the cave but then the ducks family save it. one thing you could work on is you couldve had a better title.

  2. Hello Gracie-Jo,
    I can see you are a creative storyteller when I read your story about a yellow duck. Well done.
    My advice: Remember to use all prompt words in your stories.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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