Unlucky day

Once there was a boy called Thomas who he loved birds. He had a pet that was a bird and it was in his room. It was good but one of his birds was sick, it was so revolting. The next morning his bird died. He said, “oh Rob I will love you with all my heart I will never forget you. I love you forever, forever.” He went outside and he sang a really sad song. His bird was pink, he sang, he wanted to jump on his jump thing. All that would cheer him up was his friends. He wanted them and put them in his tree house. He played with them and he had bad luck today.














One thought on “Unlucky day”

  1. Hello Paris!
    I think the death of a pet companion is one of the saddest experiences ever! I felt sorry for Thomas! 🙁
    I believe this week’s challenge was to incorporate 5 words into your writing: HUNGRY CONCRETE PINK REVOLVING (to spin or turn) JUMP. I found pink & jump but not the other three.
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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